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Fly up high
I want to fly up high, so let the knowledge be my wings, let the brave heart be my power.
Flying up high in the morning, when others are still asleep,I can’t wait to run out of my
dormitory to take a deep breath.I just can’t waste the fresh air.What I wanna do is running right away.It’s a wonderful feeling that the sweat flowing down from my forehead，then,I’ll find a bench in the small forest,read a delicate article that I like.When the sun rises,sunshine goes through the forest and comes to me,it makes me feel that I have own the sunshine. A morning
just has an end when I step on the shadow of the trees.
Flying up high in the afternoon,instead of facing the screen of computer, I lose myself in
The library.I want to read Bill Gates,not for his endless wealth he earn,but for his way to
Success.I want to read hitler，not for the crimes that he made,but for his heart 。
I want to read Lu Xun,not for his good reputation,bu