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Hollo,everyone today my topic is gratitude.Gad says,happiness is to have an indebted heart.so,gratitude is improtant for us.Regarding the parents, we must feel grateful they to give us the life.Regarding the friend, we had to feel grateful they to give us to help.Regarding teacher, we must feel grateful they to give us the knowledge.Regarding the opponent, we must feel grateful they to give the power which we progress.That's all,thanks.

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谢喽

Hello,everybody. Today my topic is gratitude.God says that happiness is to have an indebted heart.So,gratitude is important for us.Regarding our parents, we should be grateful for them to give us the life.Regarding our friends, we should be grateful for them to give us to help.Regarding our teachers, we should be grateful for them to give(impart传授) us the knowledge.Regarding our opponents, we should be grateful for them to give(stimulate激发) us the power which makes us progress.That's all,thanks!

行，小文章写得不错嘛！
说一下主要问题
1.must我给改成了should，我觉得用must太生硬了，should比较让人能接受。
2.我们要感激谁做某事，用be grateful for sb. to do sth.
其他的小毛病给你改了。希望和你的胃口！

翻译：
嘿，在座的各位。我今天的题目是感恩。上帝说过“幸福一定怀有一种感恩的内心”。因此，感恩对我们是非常重要的。对于我们的父母，我们应该感恩他们赐予我们生命。对于我们的朋友，我们应该感恩他们给我们帮助。对于我们的老师，我们应该感恩他们传授给我们知识。对于我们的对手，我们应该感恩他们激发我们进步的力量。就这些。谢谢。

首先改错，Hollo （Hello）,everyone(add ,) today my topic is gratitude. (Gap) Gad （God）says, happiness is to have an indebted heart. (Gap) so, gratitude is