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大家好，今天我的题目是我的梦想。我的梦想是独自一人去漂泊，在帐篷里面睡觉，吃野果，感受大自然新鲜的空气。说实话，我现在没有能力实现它，所以现在我有两个目标，一个是赚足够多的钱，另一个就是长大,我期待梦想成真的那一天，所以我会向着这两个目标努力！
就这些，谢谢

全文改正如下：
Hello,everyone！
Today my topic is my dream.
My dream is going to stray alone. I can sleep in the tent in the night,and eat the wild fruit,I can enjoy fresh air of the nature.To tell the truth，i don't have the ability to realize my dream now.So I have two goals for this moment.
One is to making enough money,the other is growing up.I am looking for my dream coming true so that I will be making great efforts for the two goals.
That's all,thanks.

Hello,everyone.
Today my topic is my dream.改为 The theme today I will talk to you in the lecture is about my dream.

My dream is to go straying and travelling alone.Then I can sleep in the tent,eat wild fruits,and make friend with nature. Sometimes it sounds amazing and interest! But acturally，I don't get enough capability to work out o