求批改英语日记！（1）

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英汉对照的，请高手帮看下哪里不对，说一下，我已经大一了，写作的水平好像还不如高中生。。。所以请大家一定帮忙下
Being in Guilin
1. “I’ve never been in Guilin, but I said, I want to return to Guilin.”
2. When I first read this sentence in a sci-fi novel, I don’t think it had anything to do with me, a 19 y. o. high school boy in Henan province.
3. But now, sitting in a classroom of Guilin University of electronic technology, looking through windows at the endless hills, I can think of no other words but fate, hand from God.
4. When I was filling my aspiration form of university, I’d never considered a university in Guangxi.
5. What I was dreaming of was Nanjing University and I was confident enough to abandon other choices.
6. At the last moment before I submitted my form, I thought of the sentences at the very beginning.
7. Acting on a romantic impulse, I selected a university in Guilin on no purpose.
8. Of course, it’s much worse than the Nanjing University.
9. It was just

1. “I'd never been to Guilin, I had never wanted to come to Guilin. But now, I said to myself I want to stay in Guilin.”
2. When I first read this sentence in a sci-fi novel, I don’t think it had anything to do with me, a 19 y. o. high school boy in Henan province.
3. But now, sitting in a classroom of Guilin University of electronic technology, looking out the windows at the endless hills, I can think of no other words but "fate", "hand from God." etc..
4. When I was filling my aplication form of university, I’d never considered a university in Guangxi.
5. What I was dreaming of was Nanjing University and I was confident enough to abandon other choices.
6. At the last moment before I submitted my form, I thought of the sentences at the very beginning.
7. Acting on a romantic impulse, I selected a university in Guilin on no purpose.
8. Of course, it’s much worse than the Nanjing University.
9. It was just for