UC知道求批改英语日记！（2）
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英汉对照的，请高手帮看下哪里不对，说一下，我已经大一了，写作的水平好像还不如高中生。。。所以请大家一定帮忙下
Monitor Election
1. It was the first class meeting since I had entered the Gliet(Guilin University of electronic technology).
2. We sat apart in the wide classroom and soft gust flew over our faces.
3. I just knew some of my eight roommates.
4. Others were all strangers.
5. Then our director and her two assistants appeared.
6. After all of us instructed ourselves, the man assistant announced that a monitor election was to be held.
7. What did I thought? I don’t know.
8. “I came to study.”
9. Just as I was saying this to myself, I found that, my roommate all staring at me.
10. “Come on, you were shining just now.”
11. My mind hung in the balance.
12. A middle school is for study, but a university isn’t, I thought.
13. “If you are to run for the monitor, please come to the front.”
14. The words was like a bell and I promptl
第6句中的instructed应为introduced
第9句应为：......my roommates were all staring at me.
第14句The words were(不是was) like....
第18句中foe应为for
第20句中的Impressive应为Impressively
我认为这是一篇极好的作文，祝作者学有所成!祝贺你能成为班长
Monitor's Election
1. It was the first class meeting since I had entered the Gliet(Guilin University of electronic technology).
2. We sat apart in the wide classroom and soft gust flew over our faces.
3. I just knew a part of my eight roommates.Others were all strangeness.
5. Then our director and her two assistants appeared.
6. After introduce ourselves, the man assistant announced that beginning to election monitor immediately.
7.I don’t know what i thinking that time.
8.“I coming here to study.”
9.all my roommate were staring at me when i thinking it
10. “Come on, your introduce was great just now.”
11. i was in two minds
12. high school is for study, but university is not.
13. “ if u would like