UC知道麻烦各路高手为小弟检查一下有多少语法错误
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本人最烂的就是英语作文，每次得分都很低，希望大家指出鄙人以下文章的错误，指出并修正就好，敬请不要辱骂
Nowadays,it's commonly that college students take a part time job as family teacher.It bring something well but also something not very well at the same time.
In most of families,support a child to study at college is not very easy,most of their income should be spent on their children.So if a college student could take a part time job ,it would reduce the economic pressure for his family.This
is the good effect of the college student's taking a part time job as family teacher.
And what is the bad effect?For a college student,his mainly task is study,when he take a part time job ,it will affect his study more or less.This is
the biggest bad effect of taking the family teacher's job
As far as i concerned,i think college student's taking part time job as family teacher is good thing in whole,but i think the balance point between job and study should be found .
Nowadays,it's commonly that college students take a part time job as family teacher.It bring something well but also something not very well at the same time.
In most of families,support a child to study at college is not very easy,most of their income should be spent on their children.So if a college student could take a part time job ,it would reduce the economic pressure for his family.This
is the good effect of the college student's taking a part time job as family teacher.
And what is the bad effect?For a college student,his mainly task is study,when he take a part time job ,it will affect his study more or less.This is
the biggest bad effect of taking the family teacher's job
As far as i concerned,i think college student's taking part time job as family teacher is good thing in whole,but i think the balance point between job and study should be found .
如果指大学，最好是university,college是大专之类的
commonly --> common
part time-->part-time(作定语)(后面都是)
family teacher --> tutor (后面都是)
bring --> brings
well (两次都是) --> good
most of families --> most families
support --> supporting
reduce -->lighten
pressure -->burden
student's -->students'
mainly -->main
the biggest bad -->worst
i concerned-->I'm concerned
good thing in whole-- a good thing in the whole
commonly --> common
family teacher(后面就不再指出了) --> tutor
bring --> brings
well (两次都是) --> good
most of families --> most families
support --> supporting
should --> would
children --> child(因为前文用child)
his mainly task is study --> his main task is to study
as far as i concerned --> as far as I'm concerned
taking part time job as family teacher is good thing
--> taki