帮我该下面这篇短文 共有9错 该上了6个以上就OK了

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帮我该下面这篇短文 共有9错 该上了6个以上就OK了
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all kinds of completely,new and fast teaching and learning
materials,it has different section about the teaching and learning
of the major subjects in middle schools.The purpose of them is to improve the skills of teaching and the ability of learning as well
as.Specially,it prepares lots of papers for all of the teachers and students.At the same time,it has plenty of quite beautiful picturs and interesting articles in it.Besides,we can too get much
more information about different subjests.ZXXK.com is very popular
by middle school teachers and students.I sure more people will like it.

第一行that改为which,第二行all改为many,(因为网站不可能包括所有资料,但可以说提供很多资料),第三行it前加上and,第五行ability可以改为abilities,第六行前面的as去掉(注意:本行paper不用改,因为paper作试卷讲时可以用复数,例如:look over examination papers 批阅试卷),第七行too改为also,第九行by改为with