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来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/25 09:28:34
How to Succeed in the Future Career
Succeed in the future career is a dream in every college studen’s heart. Because of college extend, more and more students can’t find job after graduate.(中文翻译；怎样在将来的职业中取得是每个大学生心中的梦想，由于高校扩张，越来越多的学生毕业后找不到工作。)
If you want to succeed in the future career, you must continually promote youself. The one thing, you may learn more acknowledge besides you major. More acknowledge you learn, more opportunity you have. The other thing, you should be confident, If you not trust youself ,no one can trust you. Third, you must learn how to adjust youself . That is say you had better keep youself enjor. (中文翻译；如果你想在将来得职业中取得成功，你必须不断的提高自己。首先，你应学了解更多除了专业以外的知识。第二，你应当有自信，如果你不相信自己，其他人更不会相信你。第三，你必须学会怎样调整自己，也就是说你最好保持好的心态。)
In my opinion, confident and hard work are more important to us to succeed in the future career, So we firmly believe that If you do you can!（中文翻译；在我看来，自信和努力工作是将来取得成功最重要的因素。所以我们坚信如果你一定能做到！）

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楼上的已经改得很好了。。说得很对
我也修改了一下。。

How to Succeed in the Future Career

It is a dream in every college student's heart to succeed in the future career. Because of the increased enrollment in colleges, more and more students can’t find good jobs after graduation.(中文翻译；怎样在将来的职业中取得是每个大学生心中的梦想，由于高校扩张，越来越多的学生毕业后找不到工作。)

If you want to be successful in your future career, you must continually promote youself. First of all, you should learn more knowledge except for your major. The more you learn, the more opportunities you will get. Secondly, you should be confident. If you don't trust youself, no one will trust you. Finally, you must learn how to adjust youself. That is to say, you'd better keep youself cheerful. (中文翻译；如果你想在将来得职业中取得成功，你必须不断的提高自己。首先，你应学了解更多除了专业以外的知识。第二，你应当有自信，如果你不相信自己，其他人更不会相信你。第三，你必须学会怎样调整自己，也就是说你最好保持好的心态。)

In my opinion, confidence and hard work are most important for us to succeed in the future career, so