帮我看看这文章有什么错误没有

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A long time ago, there was a huge apple tree. A little boy loved to come and play around it every day. He climbed to the tree top, ate the apples, took a nap under the shadow… He loved the tree and the tree loved to play with him.
Time went by…The little boy had grown up and he no longer played around the tree.
One day, the boy came back to the tree and looked sad. “Come and play with me,” the tree asked the boy.
“I am no longer a kid, I don’t play around trees anymore.” The boy replied, “I want toys. I need money to buy them.” “Sorry, but I don’t have money…but you can pick all my apples and sell them. So, you will have money.” The boy was so excited. He picked all the apples on the tree and left happily. The boy didn’t come back after he picked the apples. The tree was sad.
http://zhidao.baidu.com/question/16571816.html
其实这个是完整的,因为问题补充塞不下了..

Sorry,看错了。
第四排 and he was no longer played...
恩,其他的不太严格的话也可以不改。

那篇文章我看了,其实没什么错的吔~~~

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那篇文章我看了,其实没什么错的吔~~~