UC知道帮忙改英语面试材料(可以添改,其中打太极用英语怎么说)
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Good moring,ladies and gentlemen!
I'm glad to be here for this interview.First,let me introduce myself.
My name is... I come from Jiao Zuo , Henan. I have been preparing for interview a long time. Now
all my hard work has got a result since I have a chance to the interview by you.
I dream of being an outstanding host , director and writer.I have a lot of hobbies,such
as, singing and reading.In the spare time,i like to 打太极 which is a Chinese essence and I strongthen
my body at the same time. So I'm healthy and happy.My life motto is :where there is a will,there is a
way.My self-confidence, industry, and enthusiasm help me to conquer the difficulties I faced in life.
Althogh I don't excel among the interviewers,I tust myself.Because, efforts are the keys to success.
Nothing is difficult,if you put your heart in to it.I feel the success is nearby.
I hope I have made a deep expression on you. That's all,
I'm glad to be here for this interview.First,let me introduce myself.
My name is... I come from Jiao Zuo , Henan. I have been preparing for interview a long time. Now
all my hard work has got a result since I have a chance to the interview by you.
I dream of being an outstanding host , director and writer.I have a lot of hobbies,such
as, singing and reading.In the spare time,i like to 打太极 which is a Chinese essence and I strongthen
my body at the same time. So I'm healthy and happy.My life motto is :where there is a will,there is a
way.My self-confidence, industry, and enthusiasm help me to conquer the difficulties I faced in life.
Althogh I don't excel among the interviewers,I tust myself.Because, efforts are the keys to success.
Nothing is difficult,if you put your heart in to it.I feel the success is nearby.
I hope I have made a deep expression on you. That's all,
1）“I have been preparing for interview a long time. Now
all my hard work has got a result since I have a chance to the interview by you. ”这句不好。你应当在这里向对方为你提供这个面试的机会表示感谢，而不是讲自己通过努力获得了机会（虽然事实是这样），这样才能使对方觉得你有礼貌。
2）太极——一般都直接用拼音Taiji,或Taijiquan
3)你梦想成为host，表达的意思不够清楚。你面试是打算应聘旅馆管理者的位置吗？host是招待客人的主人、作东的意思，好像不应该成为梦想的内容。
4）“……help me to conquer the difficulties I faced in life. ”中the最好换成many，因为定冠词是特指的，让人感觉到你只克服了某些困难，这不是你想表达的意思。
5）“Althogh I don't excel among the interviewers,I tust myself”你怎么就知道你肯定不是优秀的？用maybe吧，不要用althogh 。“ trust ”改成“ be confident of ”可能更地道些。
同意上面的