企业推进战略性的人力资源管理,应使员工清楚的看到他们所获得的薪酬和享受的福利保险是企业成功发展的结果

康帅府的翻译我顶一下。
但是建议您修改为：

In promoting a strategic human resource management in an enterprise,employee should be made to understand that their salary, welfare and insurance are an outcome of the enterprise's successful development.

To promote a strategic human resource management in an enterprise,it should make the employee understand that the salary, welfare and insurance are the outcome of the enterprise's successful development.