UC知道急需英语高手帮忙
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Reading book is my one of favourite hobby.They make me know a lot of thing in the world.Sometimes reading book make me feel happy.But some sad story make me cry.I like reading book with animals.I often buy many book in the bookshop and reading book in the library.
Last Sunday,my parents and I was going to zhe park.We played very happy .And then,my parents felt tired and sat under the tree.And Iplay the hoolahoop.Suddenly,I saw a policeman wanted to catch a thief,he fell down and the policeman took he away .Before the policeman left,he said to me"You are a brave child!"
第二篇第三行漏了一句，从这里开始“Suddenly ,I saw a policeman wanted to catch a thief ,and the thief ran to me,I hadn't time to think ,throwghed the hoolahoop at the thief,he fell down ........
给你改了改，自己对照一下吧。第二段的那句话加上了
Reading is my one of favourite hobbies. Books helps me to know a lot of things in the world. Sometimes reading books makes me feel happy, but some sad stories make me cry.I like reading books with animals.I often buy many books from the bookstore and read books in the library.
Last Sunday,my parents and I went to zhe park.We had a good time.Later, my parents felt tired and sat under a tree.And I played with the hoolahoop.Suddenly,I saw a policeman trying to catch a thief. and the thief ran to me. I had no time to think ,threw the hoolahoop at the thief. He fell down and the policeman took him away .Before the policeman left,he said to me"You are a brave child!"
第一行thing和第二行STORYHE和第三行BOOK要加”S”
第三行”WITH”改为”ABOUT”
第四行READING用原形
第五行WAS GOING TO 改为WENT要用一般过去式
第六行SAT 后加DOWN
Reading book is one of my favourite hobby.They make me know a lot of things in the world.Sometimes reading book makes me feel