请英语高手看一下.

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给你以前的同学写一封信，字数必须在80个字以上，并且所写的内容必须包含以下三项：
1．询问对方现在工作/学习情况。
2．即将毕业想到对方城市找工作，希望对方能提供帮助。
3．邀请对方可以随时来自己的城市玩。

Dear friend:
How are you?
I am a little busy, you see. This is the last term in school, so the teachers are a little “mad”, so much homework!
How about you? How are you working? I will graduate three months later , I want to look for job in your city. Can you help me? And introduce some department to me.
I miss you very much; I invite you and your family to visit my city. Come here, my friend, this city is lovely, this city and my home will welcome you forever! I hope you are well at this moment, and still having a very good time!
Best wishes!
Ling

我想是要看看有没有错吧...

<Dear friend:
How are you?
I am a little busy, you see. This is the last term in school, so the teachers are a little “mad”, so much homework! >原文

改后:

Dear XXX(你朋友的名字):
How are you?
I am a little busy these days, as you can tell. Because that it is my last semester in school, the teachers always give us lots of homework.

<How about you? How are you working? I will graduate three months later , I want to look for job in your city. Can you help me? And introduce some department to me. >

How about your school(work)? I am going to graduate in three months, and I want to look for jobs in the city you live. Do you think you can help me with it? It will be nice if you could introduce some department to me.

<I miss you very much; I invite you and your family to visit my city. Come here, my friend, this city is lovely, this city and my home will welcome you forever! I hope you