请英语高手帮我看一下!!!!!

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请英语高手帮我看一下!!!!!有什麽不对的指出来!!
Tony:Good morning!
Ann:Good morning!
Tony:Nice to see you.
Ann:nice to see you.too.
Tony:How are you?
Ann:Not too bad!And you?
Tony:just so-so,How are you sister?
Ann:she is pretty good,thank you.
Tony:what is your job?
Ann:I'm a teacher,And you?
Tony:I'm a policeman.
Ann:Goodbye!
Tony:Goodbye!

How are you sister?
看上去有点怪,改成How about your sister?
此外,大小写要注意.

Tony:Good morning!
Ann:Good morning!
Tony:Nice to see you.
Ann:Nice to see you.too.
Tony:How are you?
Ann:Not too bad!And you?
Tony:Just so-so,How is your sister?
Ann:She is pretty good,thank you.
Tony:What is your job?
Ann:I'm a teacher,and you?
Tony:I'm a policeman.
Ann:Goodbye!
Tony:Goodbye!

Tony:just so-so,How are you sister? 这句应该是How is your sister?

呵呵…这则对话写得有点俗套啊,别的大致上没什么错误,句子结构注意下。比如HOWAREYOUSISTER?应改为WHAT0ABOUTYOURSISTER.才更为合理