UC知道大家帮我看看我的英文简历 写的有什么不对的地方
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Resume
Name: ***Sex: male
Date of Birth: 1981/10/15 Residency: SHENYANG
Zip Code: 110179
Email: ***
Mobile: **
Self Assessment:
After being Software Engineer two years,I understand computer Industry again.During the two years,I learned a lot of IT skill and good ability to study,logistic analysis and expression. This build up my confidence.I knowed that English is very important to a IT person,I study in my spare time.So I am an active, innovative man, a good team-worker.
Career Objective:
Desired Industry: Computers
Desired Location: BEIJING ,SHANGHAI ,SHENZHEN ,DALIAN ,SHENYANG
Desired Salary: NEGOTIABLE
Position Wanted: Senior Software Engineer ,Software Engineer ,System Engineer ,Database Engineer ,Project Manager
Work Experience
2005/03--Present：Being Computers Software Engineer at ***.
Education
2001/09--2005/07： Jilin University college of computer science a
Name: ***Sex: male
Date of Birth: 1981/10/15 Residency: SHENYANG
Zip Code: 110179
Email: ***
Mobile: **
Self Assessment:
After being Software Engineer two years,I understand computer Industry again.During the two years,I learned a lot of IT skill and good ability to study,logistic analysis and expression. This build up my confidence.I knowed that English is very important to a IT person,I study in my spare time.So I am an active, innovative man, a good team-worker.
Career Objective:
Desired Industry: Computers
Desired Location: BEIJING ,SHANGHAI ,SHENZHEN ,DALIAN ,SHENYANG
Desired Salary: NEGOTIABLE
Position Wanted: Senior Software Engineer ,Software Engineer ,System Engineer ,Database Engineer ,Project Manager
Work Experience
2005/03--Present：Being Computers Software Engineer at ***.
Education
2001/09--2005/07： Jilin University college of computer science a
日期最好这样表示:Dec. 15th, 1981
改完后的Self Assessment:
After being Software Engineer for two years,I have a better understanding on computer Industry. During the two years,I learned a lot of IT skills and good abilities, including Logistic Analysis and Expression. This builds up my confidence. I knowed that English is very important to a IT person, so I study in my spare time, and now I am an active, innovative man as well as a good team-worker.
最后一句:Thank you for your patience.
没有什么大的问题了。.:)
skill-skills
this-these
书面自我介绍貌似长句比较formal.
个人意见哦
PS，基本信息不用写邮编...姓名性别联系方式户口就行了
有些公司要求户口的
English GOOD？？
-_-;
最好加上work experience
可以做范文了 谢谢