英语短文修改，谢谢各位啦

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As the development of the world, people have to enrich themselves endlessly by lifelong education in order to catch up with the pace of the time. We have plenty ways for lifelong education. For example, long-distance education, night school studding, TV university and so on.

In my opinion, long-distance education should be the best way for people going on their lifelong education. We have to work for life after graduating from school, our time for studding is not as much as we can assign in the school. Long-distance education have soloed this problem. Attending long-distance education, we can use our free time for studding and never engross our working time. Today more and more people choose long-distance education for lifelong education, it will be more and more important in our life.

上面的错别字就不说了,正确原文如下,如有不足,还望指教!1With the development of the world, people have to enrich themselves endlessly by lifelong education in order to catch up with the pace of the time. We have plenty of ways for lifelong education. For example, long-distance education, night school studding, TV university and so on.

In my opinion, long-distance education should be the best way for people to go on their lifelong education. We have to work for life after graduating from school, our time for studding is not as much as we can assign in the school. Long-distance education have soloed this problem. Attending long-distance education, we can use our free time for studding and never engross our working time. Today more and more people choose long-distance education for lifelong education, it will be more and more important in our life

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