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是一个argumentative essay.
Teenagers should not work part-time while going to school.
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In many countries it is common for teenagers to take part-time jobs while they are still in high school, while in other societies this is virtually unheard of. In my opinion, teenagers take too much risks when they working for their part-time job. Therefore, I believe that it is not a good idea for students to work while studying.

First, a teenager's most important goal must be to learn and to do well at his studies.If do a part-time job, maybe they can make some pocket money, but may lower down their task on their studies.

Second, it's very dangerous to do a part-time job. Some teenagers were harmed or even killed when they were doing the part-time job.Parents are worried about their children when their children are doing the part-time job.

For all of these reasons, I firmly believe that most teenagers should not work part-time job because study is still their primary responsibility.