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I think that the resources can't be assign by the nation completely, the price also can't be whole to be decide by the market.
First, China is the socialism nation, resources of first time the allotment should be carry on by the government, thus attaining the more balanced allotment.
Also should study the west, make use of the market to carry on assign again.Attain the resources valid to make use of and control.
Most resourceses is assign by the market, just can make the resources fly to the profits thus tallest, develop the quickest profession, thus make the economic fast development.
But also can't be in need of the management of the government, some sparse lack the resources, such as the coal, petroleum.Have some the resources that has the influence to the environment, such as the tree, the river water etc..
These resourceses only pass the management of the government, the existence that then can hold out for long time, was more long-lastly make

I think that the resources can't be assign(assigned) by the nation completely, the price also can't be whole(whole不是动词) to be decide by the market.
First, China is the socialism（socialistic） nation(country), resources of first time the allotment should be carry on by the government, thus attaining the more balanced allotment.
Also should study the west, make use of the market to carry on assign again.Attain the resources valid to make use of and control.
Most resourceses is assign by the market, just can make the resources fly to the profits thus tallest, develop the quickest profession, thus make the economic fast development.
But also can't be in need of the management of the government, some sparse lack the resources, such as the coal, petroleum.Have some the resources that has the influence to the environment, such as the tree, the river water etc..
These resourceses only pass the management of the government, the existence that then can