请帮我把下面这段话改改吧，感激不尽！！！

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Abstract: this paper is beginning from the difinition of transhlation, then expounds the dual characteristics of language: precision and fuzziness. From these two features, the point of translatability and untranslatability are diduced. Further more, the norm of translation had been raised. Follow the line of the delvelope history of translation, Yan Fu’s “faithfulness, expressiveness and elegance” has been introduced particularity, and also the limitations has been discussed.
我是要挑出毛病来，请帮我看看有没有用词或者语法错误吧，谢谢

My Opion:
1 Expounds, you use the word of Begin, I think it is better to replace the Expounds with Expands.

2 From these two features, change to Based on these two features

3 Further more, the norm of translation had been raised.
Not understanding the meaning of this sentence. Does it mean you raise the norm or the norm has been raised by other people? If the latter is right, is it necessary to list in your abstract? That is not your work.

4 If follow is replaced by following, I guess it is better.

郁闷，拿字典查啊