翻译,我害怕外国人嘲笑我,所以我要努力改善它们(指缺点)

I try my best to make progress to avoid being laughed by the foreigners

我还是觉得不要用逐字逐句的直译，这样好一点

I am afraid the foreigners might mock me, so I will try my best to get rid of them(shortcomings)

I\'m afraid of being laughted at by foreigners,so I have to correct them (my shortcomings).

i'm afraid that those foreigners will laugh at me, so i will work hard to improve my shortcomes(或者照原意 improve them，或者用get rid of my shortcomes,意思是改掉缺点）

I am afraid that the foreigners might laugh at my shortcomings so I will try my best to get rid of them.

i am afraid the laughing from the foreigners,so i"ll trymy best to improve (my shortcomings)