拜托哪位大哥大姐帮我完成一下英文自我介绍吧~
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I am very interested in this position, which can provide me more chance and challenge. Finally, thanks all of you for giving this chance for stating my wishes. I do wish that I can become a qualified staff in the position I applied for.Thank you very much.
这是我自己写的,请大家帮我把有错误的地方改一下并加以完善,最好附上中文对照,感激不敬,谢谢谢谢~
It's a pleasure to meet you all --> It's my pleasure
I'm qualified for this interview. Qualified 不是这样用的
(A qualified doctor)
简单的一句 I'am grateful(表示感谢) to be chosen for this interview 就可以了
I am graduate from shanghai donghui vocational and technical school. Graduate 已是动词. --> I graduated from...(最好加上年份, 如last year, in 2006等)
major--> majored 表示过去式
"Is reading the technical college, studies is the business management specialty?" 不明白...我猜你是想说
--> I specialized in business management. 我专攻商业管理
I once worked in the transport agent company as the merchandiser. Once 可以省略, 我反而认为如能说出这职业为你带来了什么好处会重要些, 即你在处事方面有何改善, 学懂了什么技能, 知识, 沟通技巧, 这些会对你要应徵的这份工作有什么好处, 而令主持面试者觉得你有能力胜任这工作
--> Having worked in a transportation agency, (用a, 因之前没有提过是哪一公司, 用agency, 已代表了这机抅, 用transportation, 因我看到外国的都是这么叫) I have learnt to cooperate with (合作) one another, I have improved my communication skills which will help me work efficiently. (