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Draw a picture is the simplest way of putting an idea down ______
on paper. This is where man began to write six thousand ______
years ago. The written words we now use came down to us ______
during a long period time. They were developed from the picture ______
writing. Except the Chinese, the American Indians also developed ______
the ways of writing in pictures. So simple pictures ______
could not express man’s ideas freely. People need a better way ______
to express themselves.Thus the written words invented.After that ______
man invented papers to write their words on.The invention ______ of the paper has great changed men's life. ______

Draw改成Drawing
where改成how
此句对
period后面加of
indians应该改成indian
so改成but
man's改成men's
invented前面加were
man改成men
life改成lives

Draw ---Drawing
where---how
use/\----has

So---But

men---man