看我自己写的短文有什么毛病

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My name is Jack. l have a beautiful dream. l hope my hone have a robot in the future in the future. The robot name is superman. l like superman very much. Because he could do many things.For example, he could clean the room,cook dinner,play with dog and play football. He was also play with me .So,l like superman very much.
l hope my dream come ture.

注意看看我的时态,那些词应该写成将来时的

My name is Jack. l have a beautiful dream. l hope my home will own a robot in the future. The robot will be called superman. l think i will like superman very much. Because he will be able to do many things.For example, he could clean the room,cook dinner,play with dog and play football. He could play with me,either.So,that's the reaon why i say i will like superman very much.
l hope my dream comes ture soon.

My name is Jack. l have a beautiful dream．I want to have a robot in the future ,it will be called superman,I will love him very much for it will help me do many things .For example, he could clean the room,cook dinner ,play football with my dog as well as play with me .That's why I like it.I hope my dream will come true .