给朋友翻译了一个摘要 请给我找找缺点 谢谢
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The traditional Chinese moral is based on traditional Confucian moral, Benevolence ( Ren in Chinese), which means to love others, is the kernel of Confucianism. In the first part of the essay the thought of Confucian benevolence and the analysis of its value are introduced, pointing out that benevolence is the most valuable moral of all. To be benevolent one should love not only his family but also the masses. Benevolence represents the basic standard for us Chinese to modulate the interpersonal relationships. It contributes a lot to helping develop the Chinese national character, though it also has its limitations
第二部分分析了中学里学生和教师仁爱精神缺失的表现和原因。首先,说明了中学生群体仁爱缺乏的表现。通过问卷调查和个别座谈相结合,得出结论,中学生方面的问题主要是在以自我为中心、狭隘自私,不能诚恳待人,缺乏自尊自爱意识。教师方面问题是轻视德育,缺乏对教育事业和学生的热爱,没有正确的学生观。造成这种情况的原因是多方面的,学校教育工作的不足,正确家庭教育缺乏,社会整体道德失范的影响以
The traditional Chinese moral is based on traditional Confucian moral, Benevolence ( Ren in Chinese), which means to love others, is the kernel of Confucianism. In the first part of the essay the thought of Confucian benevolence and the analysis of its value are introduced, pointing out that benevolence is the most valuable moral of all. To be benevolent one should love not only his family but also the masses. Benevolence represents the basic standard for us Chinese to modulate the interpersonal relationships. It contributes a lot to helping develop the Chinese national character, though it also has its limitations
翻译的比我强多了,感觉有两处是不是该加逗号?
1.In the first part of the essay, the thought of Confucian benevolence ...
2.To be benevolent, one should love not only his family but also the masses.
另外,可能是你打字疏忽
the problems, which are found by conducting questionnaires and individual conversaziones, lie in their self-centered, selfish and lack of self-esteem
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