这个要怎么翻译

谢谢你的来信,我很想和你做朋友!
Thank you for your letter.I'd love to make / be friends with you.

后两句也要吗？

我的英语不是很好!请你谅解!
My English is so poor! Forgive me,please.

Thank you for you letter!
I hope very much to make friends with you.
My English is not good!
Please bear with me for that！

Thank you for your email/letter,I'd like to make friends with you.
I'm sorry that my English is poor.

Thank you for your letter.I'd like to make friends with you..But my English is not very well,so pardon me please !最后一句一般不这样直接翻译，可以委婉一点改成so wish for your teaching.

谢谢你的来信,我很想和你做朋友!我的英语不是很好!请你谅解!

Thanks for dropping me a line. I am glad to be your friend. However, please forget me for my poor English.

谢谢你的来信,我很想和你做朋友!我的英语不是很好!请你谅解!

I'm grateful for receiving your letter, I'd (I would) really like to be friends with you. However, please pardon me for my poor English.（用pardon比较好，因为forgive是当你犯错的时