能帮我改下这篇英文短文吗?谢谢

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Hello
Now let me tell you something about my today’s life ,which is full of tired and exhausted.

Today I moved to a new lab . I put away my books , in addition, I cleaned the house without cease from day to night. With the advent of my new fellows, I kept on introducing myself to them.

My new lab has accommodations for 10 persons, however , there are only 4 people in this new lab. Through our four people’s work hard, this dirty room has changed into a new one . I have had a new environment to study.

If you are willing to a good listener , I would tell you some stories about my former love in the next email. It is a mournful story.

By the way, I still can not log in the Messenger of new version, in addition, I also don’t know the true reason.

Thank you for the answers about Olympic games.

If you own a Gmail’s mail box , you can log in the Google talk, which is a perfect

Dear xxx,
i will be very appreciative if you would like to spare some time to look through what is going on on me today.
Today i am tired and exhausted. I moved to a new dormitory. After i put away my books, i began cleaning the room without cease. With the advent of my new fellows, I kept on introducing myself to them.
My new dormitory has an accommodation of 10 people,but there will be only 4 people living in this dorm.Through our hardwork, the dorm had shown on a new face and we had a new environment to study.
If you are a patient listener, i would tell you something about my former love in the next email.It is a mournful story.
By the way, i really do not know why i still can not log in the Messenger(new version).
Thanks for your answers on the Olympics.
If you own a gmail, you can download a google talk, which is a perfect prompt communication software. You can have my google talk account:
So long!
yours sincerely,(B.W;B.R;etc, as yo