UC知道请帮我看一下这篇英语作文是否有错误
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Last week,we had a exciting talk .There are something we have learnt.
Most people thing the student is too young to use the modern phones.They ofen spend too much time playing games and sending mails.(发短信是这么写吗？）Also,they may compare their modern phones with others.
Phones are provided at school if they need.
I think,it's OK that they want to get fashion.(追求时尚）But the mainly task of student is studying.
Most people thing the student is too young to use the modern phones.They ofen spend too much time playing games and sending mails.(发短信是这么写吗？）Also,they may compare their modern phones with others.
Phones are provided at school if they need.
I think,it's OK that they want to get fashion.(追求时尚）But the mainly task of student is studying.
Last week,we had a[an] exciting talk .There are something we have learnt. [we learnt much from it.]
Most people thing the student[s] is[are] too young to use the[去掉the 比较好] modern[用cell或者mobile，显然说的是手机嘛] phones.They ofen[may] spend too much time playing games and sending mails[short messages].(发短信是这么写吗？）Also,they may compare their modern[同上] phones with others.
Phones are provided at school if they need[if needed].
I think,it's OK that they want to get fashion[want to be fashionable].(追求时尚）But the mainly[main] task of student is studying[study]
There are something we have learnt. 这句改为we leant many things from this tallk好一点 短信是message
hey ofen spend too much time playing games and sending mails.age去掉often
差不多就这些了,本人英语也只是一般啦