看这篇MAY DAY 是否有语法问题

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/11 05:55:53
MAY DAY
Today is May Day's second day.
We have a holiday and take a holiday .Last day,People happy and got together.But some person couldn't got together.Like policeman,mailman,doctor and so on.They give service to people.They give people peaceful and comfortable.I really want to say"Thank you very much,we are proud of you!"You are nero!
急急急急!!!!!!!!!!!!!!帮忙修改一下,谢了

国庆节
今天是国庆节的第二天.
我们有一个假期,就休假.最后一天,人们在一起很高兴.但是一些人不能聚在一起,象警察,邮差,医生等等.他们给人们提供服务.他们安逸和舒适.我真的很想说非常谢谢,我们以你为荣.你是nero我猜测是英雄...LZ拼写错了!!

有语法错误!!

MAY DAY
Today is May Day's second day.
We have taken the holiday long time.In the last day,people get together and feel very happy.But some person can't have this holiday.Such as policeman,mailman,doctor and so on.They afford service to people.They make people peaceful and comfortable.I really want to say"Thank you very much,and we are proud of you!"You are hero!

错误严重 整个一地地道道的中式英语

mayday明明就是五月天啊!!~~
你要表达五一节最好用labor day哟^ ^