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In business activities, in line with the etiquette of behavior greatly affected the activities of the success or failure of understanding of business etiquette, on business in business activities has a very important role. By way of comparison from ceremonial dress, food etiquette, social etiquette. customary taboos and so on to study business activities of Chinese and foreign cultures etiquette similarities.
在商务活动中，合乎礼仪的举止在很大程度上影响到活动的成败，了解商务活动中的礼仪，对商务人员在商务活动中有着非常重要的作用。
本文通过比较的方法从服饰礼仪、餐饮礼仪、社交礼仪、习俗禁忌等方面来研究商务活动中中外文化礼仪的异同。

It's important for the businessmen in the commercial activity because manner is in the very great degree and we must know about it.
Through this article,we learned about the difference between Chinese and foreign manners in the culture from clothing , dining , social etiquette, custom taboo and so on.
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