帮忙修正(英语)

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Hello, this is ** speaking.
I am so glad that we have studied together for 4 years.
Many thanks to you who had ever helped me and you who had ever been with me.
Time for parting, I wish you guys all the best - really. Take care!

不错.只是第三行的定语从句应该用现在完成时,表示从过去开始一直持续到现在.have helped...have been... 你觉得呢?

Hello, this is ** speaking.
I am so glad that we have studied together for 4 years.
Many thanks to you who had ever helped me and had ever with me.
Time to leaving, I wish your guys all the best - really. See you!

Hello, this is ** speaking.
I am so glad that we have been studied together for 4 years.
Many thanks to you who had ever helped me and been with me.
Time for parting, I wish you guys all the best - really. Take care!

第二行have been studied
第四行you改为your