修正我英语日记中的错误

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Today , i'm plan to do homework everyday ,my brother will check me .
At first . thanks for brother's support . i will do my best write more beautiful .hoho
In fact , my mood is heavy, i feel terrible about i meet in this morning , severl days ago, i had provied a important file to a customer,i have recevied a letter form Our sales in today.she said :"our mouse sales to the customer is wired mouse,why contain dongle ,please explain it ASAP", according to check ,i was Discovered i got the other fellow's file to coustomer .oh ,my dear ,i made a mistake.
At once .i improved it ,exchange the file,and explain to customer and beg his (谅解)understand . and then , my Supervisor ask me how to prevent it , a series Things are coming ,everything i do is for a mistake . my careless let me failure.：(
From now on ,i understand completely , i must do everything check again and again until 100% right , i hope my supervisor to give me more encourage, Because e

1,I'm plan to---去掉'm，因为 plan 是动词，一般现在时态时不能再加be动词。
2,me--改成my homework.
3,thanks for brother's support--supporting
4,do my best write --do my best to write
5,mood is heavy ,搭配不当。可以说I'm in blue today,表示心情不佳。
6，about 后加what
7,severl --several 拼写
8,provied--provided 拼写
9,understand--understanding
10,let me failure--let me fail . let sb.do sth . 最好用 my carelessness led to the failure. carelessness是名词形式，led to 是 lead to 的过去式，导致的意思。
11，I hope that my supervisor will give me more encouragement.
hope 这个词不好用hope sb.to do 这种句式 ,encourage变名词。
12，want talk --want to talk
13,am--去掉am
相信你将你的日记公布出来并让人改正，必是一个勇敢坦诚之人，但英语上如若要进一步提高，语法上还是要花一些时间，虽然现在强调交流意思表达思想最重要，但正确语法还是需要的。可以买一本语法的书，相信对你会很有帮助。

做为一名小学生或初中生, 能写出这样的日记就不错了. 我基本能看懂是啥意思.

my brother will check me .改正成：and my brother will supervise me .监督你
i will do my best write more beautiful 不通;改正成：I will do my best to write in more beautiful letters