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My school days
I think study is very interesting and enrich my life.
On Monday, I always get up early. And read some books before I go to school. After the third classes in the afternoon, I often go home and listen to the music for a few times.
On Tuesday, I go over the all subjects. That make me to get a good grades .I must to be very study hard. Because I want to go to a good Senior High School. And getting a good job in the future. Don't you think so?
On Wednesday and Thursday, I do some exercises after school.
On Friday, I listen to the English radio. It can improve me listening.
As for weekend, I often have a good sleep in the evening. And to do some homework.
I like studying!

My school days
I think studying(主语是动词的话要改为动名词） is very interesting and enrich in(要有介词） my life. On Monday, I always get up early. And read some books before I go to school. After the third class in the afternoon, I often go home and listen to the music for a little（time是不可数名词，要用little或a little） time.
On Tuesday, I go over the all subjects. That make me to get （下面都有s了）good grades .I must to be very hard-working. Because I want to go to a good Senior High School. And getting a good job in the future. Don't you think so?
On Wednesday and Thursday, I do some exercises after school.
On Friday, I listen to the English radio. It can improve my (意思为我的 要用物主代词）listening.
As for weekend, I often have a good sleep in the evening. And doing some homework.
I like studying very much!

My school days
I think study is very interesting and enrich my life.
On Monday, I always get up early. And I read some books before I go to school. After