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Is chatting a waste of time ？
Is chatting a waste of time? Different people have different opinions on it. I don’t think chatting is a waste of time. There points can support my opinion.
First, living in the society, we have to communicate with others. Otherwise, we shall be apart from others, then , we will be lonely. Such as a bird, if only living in the forest with others, it will be happy.
Second, from chatting, we can make friends with others. We can exchange information with them, share our happiness or sadness, and also make the people cared about us happy. Once you are unhappy, if you can chat with someone and she help you solve the problem, then, you will be happier.
Third, nowadays, people around the world are all very busy, so we should try to release ourselves, chatting is one of these ways. Maybe just a joke, can lead us from the heavy stress of work.
As what I said above, I don’t think chatting is a waste of time. We should only enjoy it but not c

Is chatting a waste of time ？
Is chatting a waste of time? Different people have different opinions on(1) it. I don’t think chatting is a waste of time. There(2) points can support my opinion.
First, living in the society, we have to communicate with others. Otherwise, we shall(3) be apart(4) from others, then(5) , we will be lonely. Such as(6) a bird, if only living(7) in the forest with others, it will be happy.
Second, from chatting, we can make friends with others. We can exchange information with them, share our happiness or sadness, and also make the people cared(8) about us happy(9). Once(10) you are unhappy, if you can chat with someone and she help(11) you solve(12) the problem, then, you will be happier(13).
Third, nowadays, people around the world are all very busy, so we should try to release ourselves, chatting is one of these(14) ways. Maybe just a joke, (15)can lead us(16) from the heavy stress of work.
As what I said above, I don’t think chat