求助语法高手指正错误~3Q~~

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/06 14:51:59
各位English Professional,
最近忙了篇关于乞丐的文章,硬着头皮写完了
可是肯定有很语法错误,自己忘了很多,看的很吃力
期望大家可以多多指正,给予建议~先谢谢啦

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This social phenomenon also perplexes Spain Barcelona. The government assigned some slums, each of them distributed in the joint amongst the city and countryside. There are lots of resident are professional beggars.
Barcelona’s city superintendents thought that, these beggars must be organized, and let them do beg under the discipline and order. Therefore, they founded an organization to these beggars. And this organization elected chairman and vice-chairman in democratic way.
In order to let these beggars understand the tendency of this organization, the government also invested for them to establish the "Beggar Newspaper". It`s free to organization’s members. The newspapers’ content is about beggar's life and situation, warned the beggar do beg legitimately, and tell them how can be a civilized beg. They have to obey t

Barcelona of Spain was also perplexed by this social phenomenon. The government has assigned some slums, each of which was located in the joint between city and countryside. A lot of residents are professional beggars.
Barcelona’s city superintendents thought that, these beggars must be organized, and let them beg under control. Therefore, an organization was founded to these beggars, in which the chairman and the vice-chairman were both ejected in a democratic way.
In order to let these beggars understand the tendency of this organization, the government also invested for them to establish the "Beggar Newspaper". It’s free for organization’s members. The newspapers’ content is about beggar's life and situation, and it warned the beggar to beg legitimately, and also tell them how to be a civilized beggar. They have to obey the rules about begging time and begging place, any violator will be punished strictly by the organization. The fixed price of newspaper