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Share the feeling of the movie – You Got a Mail
According to the film, it had told us a romantic story that the hero (Joe Fox) and the heroine (Katharine) are on track of love by sending E-mails to each other, although both of them suffer from inner pressure and the collision of business interests. They finally smoothed the barrier and hardship and get together.
After watching the movie, a belief come to my mind sincere love is not a concident, but a great achievement of pursuing and cherishing love by action. In the movie, Joe and Katharine felt in love with each other through the cyber place, but their love was behind the times because of the collision of business interests. But Joe never gave up, instead, he took the initiate to make friends with Katharine. He tried his best to save the love between them, dropping a hint that he was the man who was waiting for her love. For that situation. I was deeply touched, no words can be used to describe my feeling. I should say

Sharing the feelings of the movie – You’ve Got a Mail
According to the film, it had told us a romantic story that the hero (Joe Fox) and the heroine (Katharine) were on track of love by sending E-mails to each other, although both of them suffered stress from within and the collision of business interests. They finally smoothed (这个地方个人觉得用conquer好一点) the barrier and hardship and got together.
After watching the movie, a belief came to my mind that sincere love was not a coincidence, but a great achievement of pursuing and cherishing love by action. In the movie, Joe and Katharine felt in love with each other through the cyber place, but their love was behind the times because of the collision of business interests. But Joe never gave up, instead, he took the initiation to make friends with Katharine. He tried his best to save the love between them, dropping a hint that he was the man who was waiting for her love. On that scene, I was deeply touched, no words can be used t