看看一下，下面的语句有没有语病

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/15 11:35:30
He fastened a butterfly with rope to play.Later, he saw a girl get lost and she want to look for her mother.So the policeman took her to find her mother.Xiao Dong suddenly understood the butterfly he had caught also have its mother.Its mother must be very anxious.So he decided to let the butterfly home.

He 【tied】 a butterfly with rope to play【with】.Later, he saw a girl 【got】 lost and she 【wanted】 to 【find】her mother.So 【a】 policeman took her to find her mother.Xiao Dong suddenly understood the butterfly he had caught also 【had】 its mother.Its mother must be very anxious.So he decided to let the butterfly 【go】home.
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God damn it！what amazing the chinglish it is！