帮我改改吧关于英语方面的。。谢谢大家，多提意见

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last day my friand and i has been to yichulianhua a big suppermaket.there are many people,all the people are choose foot.suddenly a blace guy stand my lift and said:"can you speak english ?
it's a surprise for me .i hurry to said :oh yeah!
he said with smill:what is you name ?
i look at his face ,it's a supper mam,tall health and sexy.his eye so specil,looked lighter than other guy .yes ,it's ture .but what i can say iasked myself in the hear .and so i anwered slowly"no"and turn around then went home
i have came back my house ,and said to my frands ,they were laughted at me .
in fact i 'm a advancer,the guy make i know how inpossible to leaning english
大家看看说说，如果我想明年考四级是不是要头悬梁啊！！

单词拼写和语法有些问题.其实四级重要的是词汇量和理解能力.要对自己有信心.不是明年才考么?呵呵.一年可以改变很多事情哦.
单词拼写我就不说了.语法说一点.
1.has been to 是完成时..既然是讲的昨天的事情,就是已经完成的动作.整篇文章的时态用过去时就可以了.
2.they were laughted at me.这都成被动式了.他们笑你.没必要用被动式.注意BE动词的使用.有一个笨办法.就是如果有动词了就不要用BE动词.除非要表示被动式..
3.the guy make i know .那人让我知道..既然是使动了,用了个MAKE.就不能用I了,要宾格.还有一个笨办法:遇到这样的情况,如果人称是做宾语的话,要用相应人称的宾格形式.

基本也就这些.总之不要对自己失去信心.要加油哦...
有什么需要帮忙的可以给我发信息或者去我空间留言,在我能力范围之内我一定帮..加油@!

last day my friand and i has been to yichulianhua a big suppermaket。
Last day 为什么不用成Yesterday呢？friand 打错，应该是friend.
has been 也错，复数该用have been,而且这里要用went to. 一个叫yichulianhua的大超市可以说a big supermarket called yichulianhua ...

整篇里有好多错处呢。。。

Yesterday my friend and I has been to yichulianhua which was a big suppermarket. There are many people, all of whome are selecting foods.Suddenly a blace(这个地方你要表达什么） guy stand by me and said:"Can you speak English?
It's a surprise for me. I responsed:oh yeah!
He said with