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来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/29 19:51:04
look at this picture. there are many people on the beach.
the man with sunglasses is Tom. he's lying on the chair. the little boy is Bob. he,s learning swimming from George. and Tom is watching them swimming.look, two boys and two girls are playing beach volleyball. they're happy.how's the weather?oh, it's sunny and hot.

首先说,大小写
然后 he,s learning swimming from George.这句话中he,s是不是he is的缩写?要是,就对了.还有learning swimming from 中swim加了ing,好象有点不合适.
最后,没了.

learning swimming from 似乎不妥

没错,除了大小写