帮忙看看英语 语句是否有错?谢谢!

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/03 01:17:15
I know the data of your company is because of xxxx, last year I left office xxxxx, now I at this company working , Our company as soon time fashion as mainly producing a quality watches, clocks , crystal ornaments in China and it's our pleasure to contact you for the possibility of setting up a business relationship.
不是英译中,而是看看英语语句有没有错误?

1、I know the data of your company is because of xxxx,这一句句法没错,如果你想说你通过什么方式得到了“贵公司”的资料,这样表达似乎有些中国化的语气,楼主可以考虑:i knew about your company through(newspaper, ad,etc.)
2、now I at this company working 这句有点儿问题,没有主动词。结合下面一句可以考虑是否可以这么说:now i am working at this company which is engaged in the production of a quality watches,, clocks , crystal ornaments in China.
3、as soon time fashion 这几个词在原句中我看不懂要表达什么意思,没搞清楚写这话的人要说什么
4、it's our pleasure to contact you for the possibility of setting up a business relationship.这句没有语法错误

I know the data of your company from XXXX. Last year I left the office XXXXX and I am working at this company now. Our company, as a leader of the fashion, mainly produces watches, clocks and crystal ornaments of high quality in China. Also, it's our pleasure to contact you for the possibility of setting up a business relationship.

中间our company as soon...实在是
看不懂原文

这是用软件翻译的英文吗?

我所知的资料贵公司是因为……,去年我离开办公室xxxxx , 现在,我在这家公司工作