帮忙看看这几句英语是否有错误

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I cried for a song and an MTV.
maybe It's not beacuse the moving
maybe just beacuse I can't touch that distant love .
you see..I lost so many..
或者如果有错误的话,该怎么说.
中文是这样的
我因为一首歌和一支MTV哭泣
或许不是因为感动
或许是为那样的爱情遥不可及而哭泣.
你看,我失去了那么多...

I cried for a song and a MTV. －－－（ 不能用“an”）
maybe It's not beacuse of the touching －－－（beacuse of the touching）
maybe it's beacuse of the unreachable love.－－－（用unreachable love）
Look..I've lost that much.－－－(用过去完成时；不可数要用much)

I cried for a song and a MTV.
Maybe it was not for sensation, and not for the love never been touched.
You see, I lost so much.