求教了，帮一下忙呀，找一下错,并改一下

1.tell you something for my holiday中把for改成about
2.I go to 改成I went to，后面都说了，是last week
3.在Ruins of Yuanmingyuan和and so on之间是不是应该有个逗号呀
4.In Beijing Zoo I looked是不是应该改成we looked
5.老外都说giant pandas吧
其他的就想不出来了

something about my holiday
I went to
with my parents
I saw

for my holiday—in my holiday
go to —went to

Now let me tell you something ABOUT my holiday.I WENT to Beijing with Dad and Mom last week.We visited Beihai Park,the Forbidden City,Ruins of Yuanmingyuan and so on.In Beijing Zoo I SAW some lovely pandas

for my holiday-about my holiday
go to -- went to
looked -- saw

I go to-----I went to
looked----saw