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Do you like fish? I like fish very much. In my bedroom has a fish jar.In the fish jar,has a lot of fish.
Now, let me tell you something about fish!
Fish have many kinds.My fish are peacock fish.And thet are have many colour.Some are big,for example,鲨鱼. And some are small.Some live in see,and some live in the river```
Of course.fish is also healthy food.So eat more it,is better for us.
Now, let me tell you something about fish!
Fish have many kinds.My fish are peacock fish.And thet are have many colour.Some are big,for example,鲨鱼. And some are small.Some live in see,and some live in the river```
Of course.fish is also healthy food.So eat more it,is better for us.
Do you like fish? I like fish very much. In my bedroom there is a fish jar.In the fish jar,there are a lot of fish.
Now, let me tell you something about fish!
Fish have many kinds.My fish are peacock fish.And they have many colours.Some are big such as shark,and some are small.Some live in the see,and some live in the river.
Of course,fish is also healthy food.So the more we eat,the better for us.
1.Do you like fish?fish应加es,因为这里它当鱼讲,因此是复数.当鱼肉讲时用单数.
2.has a lot of fish. 同理.
3.Fish have many kinds.你可仪把fish改为fishes,也可以在fish前加定贯词the,表示鱼群.
4.And thet are have many colour.thet改they.
5.Some live in see,把see改sea.像这样some...some...的句型，你可以换为:some..others are...
6.eat more it改eatit more.