好的追加100分！（诚信．）

1. in May 8,改成ON(具体时间用ON)
2.But I live in Hangzhou beacuse my father work here(work后面加S,去掉 beacuse 或者But ,因为英语里面因为和所以不呢感同时出现)

3.wash my hands 改成washed my hands
4.reached to my school 去TO
5.On our ways home 改成on our way home
6.I had rices 改为I had rice(rice不可数）
7.FISHES改为FISH
8.．half past nine
9．After the school改为After school
10.In class I worked hard改为In the class
11.WENT TO BED 改为went to bed

I was born in Shanghai (at) May 8,1985.But I (lived) in Hangzhou beacuse my father (worked) there.Yesterday I got up early and (washed) my hands and face.I reached my school very early.About class I worked hard.After() school my friends and I went home.On our (way) home I bought a new watch.(After) I got home,I had rices and fishes for supper.I finished my homework (before) half to nine and went to () bed at ten .

好久不碰英语了 我试着答一下噢 如果错了 还请原谅
8th
lived
my father worked
there
washed my hands
reac