UC知道朋友们忙帮看看这篇简单的英语文章这样翻有错误吗？
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October 16th
Dear Sam and Jenny,
Thank you very much for letting me stay in your house during my holiday.With This letter I am sending you the photos of our wonderful holiday in Hainan.Ihave kept a few photos which I like very much.They make me tink of the happy days we spent together.I will put them on the wall,xomewhere near my bed.
At this moment I am very busy with my studies.I had a godd time during the holiday,and now it is time for me to study hard.I must do well in the exams.
How about you ?Inyour last letter you wrote that you were feeling very tired.I hope you are feeling betrer now.Will you be going to Australia for Christamsa or will you stay in China?If it isn'ttoo cold for you,i would like to invite you to come and visit me in the north of China over the next holiday in January.
Thanks again and I wish you all the best.
yours,
Amy Zhang
亲爱的Sam和Jenny，
谢谢你们让我在你们家度过了我
Dear Sam and Jenny,
Thank you very much for letting me stay in your house during my holiday.With This letter I am sending you the photos of our wonderful holiday in Hainan.Ihave kept a few photos which I like very much.They make me tink of the happy days we spent together.I will put them on the wall,xomewhere near my bed.
At this moment I am very busy with my studies.I had a godd time during the holiday,and now it is time for me to study hard.I must do well in the exams.
How about you ?Inyour last letter you wrote that you were feeling very tired.I hope you are feeling betrer now.Will you be going to Australia for Christamsa or will you stay in China?If it isn'ttoo cold for you,i would like to invite you to come and visit me in the north of China over the next holiday in January.
Thanks again and I wish you all the best.
yours,
Amy Zhang
亲爱的Sam和Jenny，
谢谢你们让我在你们家度过了我
1同意楼上。
2“我用了一段美好的时间去度假，现在到我应该努力学习的时候，我必须做出个好成绩。 ”有点生硬，可以改成“之前度过了美好的假日，现在是时候努力学习，我必须考个好成绩。”
"如果那对你不够冷": 如果不介意更冷的天气的话...
其他没什么大问题.
到是英文原文的小问题不少...(笑)
i would invite you to come and visit me建议改成i would like to invite u to come and see me...
最后建议把i wish you 的i删除