英语作文??帮我修改一下.

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帮我修改一下,额 .. 初一升初二的水平左右.

并且说出 主 谓 宾 定 状 补 之类

eg: I like books.
主语 谓语 宾语

作文：

My Summer Vacaton

I had a great summer vacation.
On the nice morning. My parents and I ran to the bridge. My mother was very tired , but I took an interested ranning .My father at a high speed ran, so did I at a high speed ran too. Just a minute , my father said :" I am really tired ,I want to take a seat ." but I didn't want to take a seat , so I in a loud voice :" I want to ran !" Afer a time , I ran back to my father there , I said :"I want to go home ! " My father said with
a smile :" Running is good for your health ."

然后......XXX 你们帮我写些感受，我也不知道怎么写。

老师说我后面不清不楚，要写出意义~~

帮帮!~~
可以打上全文吗?

还有我不懂什么主 谓 宾 定 状 补 之类
的东西,老师叫我们画出来并写出 主 谓 宾 定 状 补 之类

第一个错；假期拼错了 vocation
第二个错：不是ranning 是running
第三个错：My father后面要加was,去掉speed后面的ran
第四个错；so did I后面的全部删掉
in a loud voice前面应该加said或者spoke
是After a while,不是Afer a time
去掉my father后面的there
最后一句话我觉得改成
I think you really know running is good for your health now

以上几位都回答了，我补充一些：
so I in a loud voice :“I want to ran !”
此句中有错，改为：so I in a loud voice said:“I want to run !”
注：to ran 不对，to后面加原形
还有一个是：took an interest in句式。

My Summer Vacation
I had a great summer vacation.
On the nice morning. My parents and I ran to the bridge. My mother was very tired , but I took an interest in running .My father at a high speed ran, so did I .Just a minute , my father said :" I am really tired ,I want to take a seat ." but I didn't want to take a seat , so I was in a loud voice and said :" I want to run !" Afer a time , I ran back to my father there ,then I said :"I want to go home ! &quo