谁帮我写一个英文E－mail

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谁帮我写个英语E－mail?
内容是这样的：
亲爱的Mary:
你好！我是2007年全国小学生英语夏令营营员，在夏令营中，我听李波教授说我发音有问题，于是，我在闭营后在家练习发音，我想把我的读的英语录下音发给你，请您赐教！
祝福语

格式问题请大家帮我解决，我不会。先谢谢各位了！对了，写的时候要注意礼貌哟！

Dear Mary,
I hope ererything gets well!I am a member of 2007 national pupil English summer camp.In the summer camp ,MR.Libo said that I had problems in pronunciation,so I practiced my pronunciation after the summer camp,I would like to record my pronunciation and send to you,will you please grant your instructions?
With my good wishes!
Sincerely yours,XX

Dear Mary:
I hope you are well.I am a member of the 2007 National Pupil Summer Camp,in which Professor LiBo told me that there was something wrong with my pronunciation.As a result, I praciced pronouncing at home after the Summer Camp,and I want to send the record that I read to you.Thanks for you grant instruction!

Best wishes for you
yours;
XXX

Dear Mary,

How are you today? I wish you everything goes well!

i am a muber of the 2007 National Pupil English Summer Camp. Durning the Summer Camp, Professor Li Bo sai