帮我看一下这段英文有没有错误

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/10 19:24:37
Qingyuan monsoon climate is subtropical, warm and humid, four distinct seasons, with the average temperature of 17.4 ° C, 17.6 mm of precipitation, frost-free period 245 die prematurely. The general characteristics of winter without cold, summer heat without. On the local, East and northern temperatures than the central and southwestern lower short frost-free period, the greater the temperature difference between day and night.

Qingyuan monsoon climate建议改为：The climate of Qingyuan monsoon

four distinct seasons前面建议加上and has

17.6 mm of precipitation建议改为：precipitation of 17.6mm，这样可以与前一短语结构一致

frost-free period前面建议加上and a

die应该改为day

The general characteristics of winter without cold, summer heat without建议更改为：The winter and summer here are relatively mild

最后一句没有看明白，建议给出原文！

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