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Today is the military training first day.The weather is very fine .
Our drillmaster is very young,only seventeen years old.His name is Tony White .He is very lovable and very friendly.We called him Tony.
The weather is very hot. We stood in the sun all day. The first day military training life made me to feel teredly.But I was very happy.Because I had known many new classmates. Thdy were very humorous ,smart and friendly.I thought I can get on well with them.
Today I am very happy.Ihope tomorrow will be better!
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It was the first day of military training.It was very fine.Our drillmaster was very young,only 17 years old.His name was Tony White.He was lovable and very friendly.We all called him Tony.
It was very hot.We stood under the sun for all day .The first day military training life made me feel teredly.But i was very happy,i had known many new classmates.They were very humorous,smart and friendly.I thought I could get on well with them
Today I am very hapy.I hope I will be better tomorrow
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It was the first day of the military training.
The weather was very fine .
Our drillmaster was very young, and he was only seventeen years old.His name was Tony White .He was very lovable and very friendly.We called him Tony.
The weather is very hot. We stood in the sun all day. Since the first day of military training life made me feel tiredly, I was very happy, because I had known many new classmates. Thdy (??They??)were very humorous ,sm