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In the summer vacation,I am stay at home. my birthday is in the july 7th.my sister’s birthday in the july 7th too.
In the july 7th ,I have a birthday party with my sister.in the morning,we are go to cake’s shop.we buy a very big cake.i like it very much.then we go to home.we take telephones to my friends and her friends.in the afternoon,we are go to shop take a cake.then we go to home.we are watching tv.
At 5 o’clock,(门铃).I open the door,I see my friends standing in the door.they are have many present for me.there are very good.i like them very much.at 6 o’clock, we are eat dinner.my mother cook the many delicous food.my friend very happy.then we are eat cake.open the cake’s box,we see a very big and beautiful cake.first,we are to insert candles.second,I to make a pledge.then we are eat cake.
At 8 o’clock,we are play the games and speak storys until 10 o’clock.
Today we are very happy.i like birt
A day in the summer vacation
In the summer vacation,I stayed at home. My birthday is July 7th. My sister’s birthday is july 7th, too.
In July 7th ,I had a birthday party with my sister.In the morning,we went to cake’s shop. We booked a very big cake. We like it very much. Rhen we went home. We made telephone calls to our friends. In the afternoon, we went to shop to take the cake. Then we went home. we were watching TV.
At 5 o’clock,the doorbell ringed(门铃).I opened the door,I saw my friends standing in the door.They prepared many presents for me.They are very good. I like them very much. At 6 o'clock, we had dinner. My mother cooked many delicous food. My friends were very happy.Then we ate cake. Opening the cake’s box, we saw a very big and beautiful cake. first,we inserted candles.second,I made a pledge. Then we ate cake.
At 8 o’clock,we played games and told storys until 10 o’clock.
Today we were very happy.I like the birthday party very mu