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It is said that every heart has its own sorrow.. yes, living in the world, we must experience lots of frustrations and difficulties, which are unforeseen, traffic accident, floodwater, illness,etc. we can’t predict that when they will happen...when we have difficulties, we can turn to others, others' help are so important to us that I can’t imagine how the life will be without it.
Help is needed in everyone’s daily life. One day, I had a stomachache, I felt terrible. my best friend looked after me carefully. No words can express my thankfulness to her for the help .He offered me a cup of hot water, and told me to have the medicine. In addition, she also cleaned the classroom instead of me (that day, I was on duty).
All of above tell us a truth——everyone needs help .Do you know volunteers,?they are a group of people who always help others without expecting any rewards. They devote their whole life to people who need help. They

It is said that every heart has its own sorrow. Living in this world, we have to experience lots of frustrations and difficulties which can't be foreseen, traffic accidents, floodwater, illness,etc. we can’t predict when they will happen...And when we have difficulties, we can turn to others. Their help is so meaningful to us and just imagine how terrible our lives will be without it.
Help is needed in everyone’s daily life. Say, one day I had a stomachache and I felt terrible. One of my friends took care of me carefully and no words can express my thankfulness to her for helping. She reminded me to take the medicine on time. What's more, she cleaned the classroom instead of me when I was on duty.
All of above tell us a truth——everyone needs help .Do you know volunteers?they are a group of people who are always ready to help others without expecting any rewards. They devote their whole lives to help people who are bogged in difficulties or something. They are ordi